Too bad it was a stick animation.
Personally I don't like stick animations, but I thought this was alright because of it's length, a nice time killer was needed for me.
Anyways, You could probably improve on your animation style, add a little more drawing into this, try to focus on not making the backgrounds and people very plain.
It was a little humorous since Xaio Xaio was randomly there.
Hope this helps,
This was nice for a start.
About 99% of user's first flashes on Newgrounds end up being stick animations, and your enthusiasm is high, which means you are confident this is proficient.
Hey, at least you're learning Flash and you have no doubts,
Keep making more stuff for people to review and get more suggestions.
I happen to be around the same age as you I see.
Thanks for the review. Many people have been talking about a second part to this animation so I think I will.
I'm not one for naruto tributes.
Maybe it's just me, but I don't really like Naruto things. But hey, I like the style so I will try to it.
Keep animating, try to make up your own things though.
You Just Plain Didn't Do Anything.
It's not that you didn't do anything actually, it's the fact that it's just a bunch of non-streaming music put together to make a large, space-taking flash.
Next time you make a flash, don't just make some non-streaming 'Jukebox', make something original, or better yet, something original that you can try harder on.
This was a good way to kill some time.
If I'm bored, I know I will search up this game again to play a little.
This was a very original concept that I don't think I have ever seen before, so I can't think of any ways to make it funner, but it was well built.
Thanks for the positive support :)
I thought it was okay, but you can improve.
I personally think that this was far too easy, I like a challenge like half of the other people on Newgrounds, but you could add some more speed to the enemies, more rapid fire, more enemies spawning, and most of all, a wider verity of different types of enemies would be nice.
This was a very well made game overall and I respect your efforts.
I thought it was good.
I think some of the bass was a little off with the background, one sounded higher then the other and a little unclear, but I thought it was overall nice.
I do think you can improve though!
I kinda wanted the intro sound to be off from the bass, just to make it so it didn't blend in too well and hide behind the bass. I tried it while it was like, with the bass, and it sounded too mixed up in the fray. This is the intro's soapbox, 'cause now it stands out. =]
This is perfect!
This is just what I need for Force Bouncer, your work is quality!
Have you ever considered signing a record contract??
You're that good.
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