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This was a good way to kill some time.

If I'm bored, I know I will search up this game again to play a little.
This was a very original concept that I don't think I have ever seen before, so I can't think of any ways to make it funner, but it was well built.

edit-undo responds:

Thanks for the positive support :)

I couldn't stop playing this!

I have seen this on a few other websites before Newgrounds, and let me tell you, this is one work of art. It's so addictive that I couldn't stop playing this.
If this thing were to somehow get blamed (Which it obviously won't to a large extent) I would commit suicide.
Nice job.

Coolio-Niato responds:

Its actually never gotten on other websites before...it was only finished today 10 min prior to submission on NG. Thanks for the review though =)
Peace
Coolio-N

Ok for starters :)

I would say it's an ok start if you are new to this, prohapse some lessons can come out of this, I have some good ideas for you and suggestions as a flash designer myself. I say this should be saved, nice start.

vivo responds:

Yea :P its true that I am new to tutorial

I will try doing a better one next time =)

Well done!

even though I dont look at a lot of NG tutorials and I have been working with flash for almost 6 years, I know a good flash when I see one!

1. this was worked hard on
2. nice use of movie clips
3. helpful to those who dont know how to use flash
4. it tells you more than what it says it's goin to tell you! (helpful)
5. the preloader is ACCTUALLY real and working (unlike a lot I see)
6. GREAT use of the color mixer!
7. worked more than a day on it (I hope)

Smoking-Chimney responds:

Thanks a lot for the review :D and in answer to number 7, it took about a month in between and around other projects.

Good Job!

you did very well,
I dont usually see things like this around the portal anymore
But I did have some small arguements about this game

Here are some suggestions:
1. Get a better music file (go to vgmusic if you didnt already)
2. make mario run faster
3. make the BG music volume go down to none when the
dieing sound starts playing and on the last frame make the
music go back to it's original volume!
(pretty simple action scrupt to do I do it a lot)
4. make mario throw fireballs (if it's not to much of a problem)
5. make the game side scrolling so the game is not just devided
into a million seperate rooms (gives it more feeling of the
classic mario games for the SNES and NES)

good job overall though!
this will make it through!
don't be surprised if it gets on the top 50's list!!!
if it dousnt make it to the dop 50's list just try
the upgrades I suggested on maybe a second version.

regards,
CheeseDude781

Sinterkaas responds:

Well, I am thinking of making a direct "port" of the SNES game, that means exactly the same stuff on the places of the original etc.
Thanks for the review!

Thanks for leaving nice reviews and suggestions on my games, they really help a lot!

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